Only the Young (Taylor Swift song) was a Music good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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Maybe we should rename "Only the Young (Taylor Swift song)" into "Only The Young (Taylor Swift song)". You see, "Only The Young" is the actual name of the song. Young English Actor (talk) 08:04, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Wikipedia doesn't care. According to the Manual of Style regarding titles, the word "the" is not capitalized in ANY song/album. BawinV (talk) 08:27, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The promotional single release is not written out anywhere in the body
Remove "that follows Swift's life and career over several years" part
"the song was written and" → "the song was both written and"
Only write the 2018 United States elections
All of the comp info needs to be written out in the appropriate area of the body
Not done
""Only the Young" discusses" → ""Only the Young" discusses subjects such as"
"It is built around an" → "The song is built around an" and this should start the para
"was met with critical acclaim upon release," → "received acclaim from music critics upon release," with the pipe
"Music critics have noted" → "Some critics have noted"
Start the last para with a sentence mentioning any notable award(s) for the song
"song on it." → "song on the chart." but I am confused about the order of the charts; shouldn't the secondary digital chart come after all of the others since they are primary ones?
"top 40 in Australia, Hungary and Ireland, and top 50" → "the top 40 in Australia, Hungary, and Ireland, as well as the top 50"
Taylor Swift, "How Midterm Elections Inspired Taylor Swift's New Song, 'Only the Young'", → Taylor Swift speaking to (keeping Variety at the end)
"interview with Willman," → "interview with Chris Willman of Variety," with the pipe
"that the song is" → "that the song is both"
The audio sample text is mostly unsourced and pipe refrain to Chorus
"on the album" → "for the album"
"and that it is" → "Swift further said that the song is" starting a new sentence, also add how she said it is for Miss Americana
"on in a week" → "on during a week"
Begin the comp para with actual info about the song's composition, which you can easily add from looking through the sources and try to be broad in your coverage, mentioning any instruments used and Variety ref should be used to write how Little's daughters contribute choir vocals. For content like this and it being a protest song, the info can be in more than one section since the context differs.
Not done this still needs expansion --K. Peake 09:55, 15 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 12:03, 28 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Pinging nominator @Ronherry:. Should there be no further response within two more days, please give the nominator (or me) a heads-up so that this GAN be resolved in time. Ippantekina (talk) 08:29, 3 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Ippantekina Thanks a lot for posting that message, I came here just now to ping the nomination but you've done that. --K. Peake 09:17, 3 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I apologize. I've been busy lately. I'll perform your suggested edits now. I submitted this article for GA back in September, and I have since become busier than usual. Ronherry (talk)
Ronherry Sorry I ironically forgot to get back on this initially, but after looking now I can see you've done up to the media section and I've marked what suggestions of the areas worked on have not been implemented. --K. Peake 09:55, 15 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
✗ Fail since it is now over a week and there hasn't been a response to my latest comments; doing this per the user's talk page. --K. Peake 07:25, 24 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Kyle Peake: Thank you for your comments. I will re-nominate this article when I'm actually ready for a GAN, and after fixing the article as per your suggestions. Have a nice day. Ronherry (talk) 07:45, 24 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Not done
On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 12:03, 28 November 2021 (UTC)