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WP:OVERLINK of Blur under producers but they are not listed in personnel under this role, so either add there or remove from the infobox if they actually did not produce the song
All of the writing and production credits need to be written out in the body since they are in the lead
"serving as an additional producer." → "also serving as a producer."
Mention the premiere before the single release; something like, "After being premiered via BBC Radio 1 on 3 March, it..."
"tree in Morocco."" → "tree in Morocco"." but this sentence is not backed up
"the band worked with" → "Blur worked with"
"to "Out of Time"." → "on "Out of Time"." but where is the orchestral arrangement sourced?
Any sentence including a quote needs the source invoked at the end of it
Add the other producers after Ben Hillier with a source, mentioning writers around this area too
I added the info about the writers and producer in the next section, any problem with it? Alexreach me! 03:32, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The only thing that needs fixing is that you should writer Hillier there, as his full name has already been used. --K. Peake 08:12, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"and the first single" → "and the lead single" with the wikilink
Add PopMatters ref because you need more than one source to verify the ballad description
"and also features Albarn's unadulterated vocals and" → "before Albarn's unadulterated vocals and" since otherwise it sounds like these appear at the start
"simplistic drums," as well as" → "simplistic drums", as well as" per MOS:QUOTE
"string group, as well as a tambourine, are" → "string group and a tambourine are" with the pipe
"Lyrically, it deals with" → "Lyrically, the song deals with" making this a new para
"gently out of time."" → "gently out of time"."
"departure from the group." → "departure from Blur."
"with these elements blending" → "He noted the elements are blended" as a new sentence
"with Alex James's "loping" bass line, Dave Rowntree's" → "with James' "loping" bass line, Rowntree's" with the pipe (they will have already been mentioned by here once you add in writers)
Remove "for "Out of Time"" after the accompanying part since the word implies this was to accompany the song of the article
"American military machine."" → "American military machine"." per MOS:QUOTE
"The video premiered" → "The visual premiered" to avoid overusage of video
"is centred on" → "is centred around"
"don't know anymore..."." → "don't know anymore..." since the ellipsis ends the sentence, plus you need a source here because it is a quote so MOS:TVPLOT does not apply
I removed the whole sentence as I couldn't find any source for it Alexreach me! 03:32, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
No problem here since it's not a key part of the music video from what I gathered --K. Peake 08:12, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hardwick's quote should begin at the various stories part, as we already know about the documentary being inspiration by this point