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I've attempted to trim the fat in this article: the wording was getting a bit convoluted and repetitious. Although, one thing I removed that I'm unsure of is the assertion that von Bohlen "played in the band's second incarnation." It was ambiguous which band's second incarnation this was referring to: Cap'n Jazz or Owls. (?) Whitejay251 03:48, 11 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]
