Talk:Pasto Ventura

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Pasto Ventura/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 00:54, 20 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria[edit]

1. Prose  Pass

2. Verifiability  Pass

3. Depth of Coverage  Pass

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations  Likely

7. Miscellaneous  Pass

Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 14:38, 21 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments[edit]

1.

  • Per MOS:OVERLINK, I'm not sure if Argentina needs linked
    Unlinked. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:39, 21 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Link Los Nacimientos, make sure you get the right one from the dab page Los Nacimientos, they both seem to be in the applicable province
    Linked, bit I can't say that I am very sure on this. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:39, 21 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "deposits of lapilli, lava bombs and scoria" - Link scoria
    Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:39, 21 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "7 volcanic domes,[6] 2 maars and 3 tuff rings;" - I think MOS:NUMERALS applies here
    Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:39, 21 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Mafic is a duplink
  • All sections should be summarized in the lead, the climate and vegetation section isn't.
    Both done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:39, 21 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

2.

  • The reference titles and author's name shouldn't be in allcaps
  • Should refs 4 and 5 have accessdates since the sources are online?
  • Ref 35 same as above
Done, added to 4 and 5 but not to 35 as that is a journal article. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:39, 21 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Is an image of this freely available? I understand that with many subjects there isn't one.
    Not as far as I know. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:39, 21 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

7.

Good work. Placing this one of hold, only a few things to address. Hog Farm (talk) 22:42, 20 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]