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"Style/layout errors"[edit]

"English League Two club Burton Albion" is what Mr Peschisolido was manager of, and it's phrased in standard English. "English club Burton Albion of League Two" in the middle of a sentence reads awkwardly, and including the "of" in the wording linked to Burton Albion F.C. is just wrong. Remember we're here to make things clear to the general reader, not the football expert.
Please read WP:NOTBROKEN. We're advised *not* to "fix" redirects that work, for all sorts of reasons. Both Juventus and Queens Park Rangers redirect to the intended target, so shouldn;t be "fixed". cheers, Struway2 (talk) 19:58, 28 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]