Talk:Pavle Đurišić/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk · contribs) 13:58, 10 May 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   prose: (MoS):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

1. and British Special Operations Executive. Suggest - and a British Special Operations Executive

2. and after moving around for a while established his base at. Suggest - after moving around for a while he established his base at

3. they met their doom in May. Suggest - they met their downfall in May

4. Suggest you break up the references into books and websites as it looks neater.

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 13:58, 10 May 2012 (UTC)

Passed. Good job Producer. Thurgate (talk) 16:14, 10 May 2012 (UTC)