Talk:Pokémon Channel/GA1
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Reviewer: Buffbills7701 (talk · contribs) 22:14, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
Unreferenced Sentences[edit]
- "...a similar digital pet-type game where the player plays with a Pikachu—and promote the Nintendo e-Reader peripheral device."
- "The game was first announced at Electronic Entertainment Expo (E3) 2003."
Other notes[edit]
- "The game was first announced at Electronic Entertainment Expo (E3) 2003." Shouldn't in be added in making it "Electronic Entertainment Expo (E3)in 2003"?
- "17. Ambrella. Pokémon Channel. "Oak: Oh? What was that cry?"" Should the references just quote parts of the game?
- Why is there a picture of the Pokémon Mini in the section about the development of the game? The section doesn't mention the Mini at all.
- "...making it the thirteenth best-selling game during the week from July 14 to July 20." WP:FANCRUFT. I'm positive no one cares how good it was during a week.
- That week is significant, but I can see how that might not have been apparent. (It was the week of the game's release in Japan; I haven't found any more reliable sales information, including from Japan.) Rephrased. Tezero (talk) 00:52, 11 February 2014 (UTC)
- "During the week from..." is bad grammar. Perhaps "During the week of..." would work better?
Verdict[edit]
I've decided to put this article on hold for a week. buffbills7701 22:14, 10 February 2014 (UTC)