Talk:Prince Romerson/GA1
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:15, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:15, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
- General
- Refer to him consistently as either "Prince Romerson" or "Romerson" once you have introduced him.
- What exactly is Prince Romerson best known for? What is special about him?
- Difficult to answer since everyone has their own definition of special. He was a soldier who fought in the Civil War. His military service in the Navy, Army and the Buffalo Soldiers and the renewed interests among Hawaiian researchers currently about these type of figures.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 16:36, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
- Lead
- The lead should be a least a good para long for an article of this length, touching all the main points of the article
- Life
- ...included in lists of Filipino American Civil War combatants There are 4 refs at the end of this. I think three would have done.
- Legacy
- However, in recent years It should be clearer what time you are referring to exactly
@KAVEBEAR: Please respond. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 05:15, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
@Sainsf: Let me know what else. Thanks.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 16:36, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for the changes. I am happy to promote this. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:32, 26 June 2016 (UTC)