Talk:Promenade MRT station/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ArnabSaha (talk · contribs) 08:44, 1 September 2020 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

2. Is it verifiable with no original research?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

   B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:

   C. It contains no original research:

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail: ❯❯❯   S A H A 11:57, 4 September 2020 (UTC) (2nd opinion given by Berrely)

Comments

• Paraphrasing not needed. If you want, you can.
• Remove MOS:ALLCAPS from citations and citations from lead as per WP:CITELEAD.
  •  Done
  • I have removed the citelead. ❯❯❯   S A H A
• Link or describe "kuehs" with a note.
  • Linked it and solved some minor issues. ❯❯❯   S A H A
• Change S$ to US$ using Template:To USD. Keep both currencies, like- S$ abc (US$ xyz).
  •  Done
• The circle line section starts with "Contract 825". Add more details to it. Same with Contract C902.
  • Hmm, will just adding the context of the station will do? There isn't really much to talk about, as decisions of the station site isn't totally open to us.--ZKang123 (talk) 13:00, 3 September 2020 (UTC)
    • also, you can add this "C825 project" (found it from ref [8].) or just remove the contract number. only the word contract will be sufficient. ❯❯❯   S A H A 08:00, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
      • I rather keep the contract number. Contracts by LTA for a certain project have a unique number.--ZKang123 (talk) 09:15, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
• Some citations are not properly formatted. Example - The Straits Times [17]. Add source date, author.
  •  Done
• Avoid using & as per MOS:&.
  •  Fixed
• Avoid one sentence para. MOS:PARA
  •  Fixed
• Add platform details for line. Like- Circle line uses Platform A/B/C.
  •  Fixed in picture captions.
• Only Bayfront was linked in the lead. Link the whole Bayfront station.
  • Corrected it. ❯❯❯   S A H A
• Add wikilinks once. There are some repetitions.
  •  Fixed
• "Circle line Extension" E is in caps.
  •  Fixed
    • Sorry, my bad. I meant something, and wrote something else. E won't be in caps. ❯❯❯   S A H A
    •  Fixed Does this have to apply to the source titles? Because that's how it is in the sources.--ZKang123 (talk) 09:15, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
      • ZKang123, nope. It's optional for sources (title case or sentence case). more details in MOS:ALLCAPS. ❯❯❯   S A H A
• Previous names not mentioned in the body.
  •  Done Well, I already brought up the working name, and the eventual decision on Promenade.--ZKang123 (talk) 13:00, 3 September 2020 (UTC)
• "The station is located near ..." add this in the body with ref.
  •  Done
• Is platform B linked with circle line?
  • Yes it is.--ZKang123 (talk) 13:00, 3 September 2020 (UTC)
    • Then I would suggest swapping the platform B image with the Exit A image. ❯❯❯   S A H A 07:25, 4 September 2020 (UTC)
    •  Fixed
• Need more station details in the body. Bicycle facilities, Platform levels.
  • Can't really specify; no official sources on these. Removed some details as unsourced. Rather leave in the infobox.--ZKang123 (talk) 13:00, 3 September 2020 (UTC)
• Reference needed for Parking, Bicycle facilities, address.
  •  Done
• More details about PHUNK.
  •  Done Added link.--ZKang123 (talk) 13:00, 3 September 2020 (UTC)

❯❯❯   S A H A 15:54, 1 September 2020 (UTC)

• • • Also added details on the artwork background, from a CCL AiT book.--ZKang123 (talk) 09:15, 4 September 2020 (UTC)