Talk:Pseudoxanthoma elasticum/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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- I'll take over this review. since above appears to be fake, comments soon Jimfbleak - talk to me? 12:06, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
- Lead is a bit thin, doesn’t mention some of your major sections eg Epidemiology, History
- Do you need so many short main sections?
- Please check linking, many unfamiliar terms, like papular lesions and cutaneous laxity are not linked on first occurrence, although you’ve link skin, eyes and stomach, and the gene has three links
- Other systems have become somewhat outdated by the discovery of the ABCC6 mutations. – vague, what other systems?
- For excessive areas of skin – affected skin?
I'll read again tomorrow Jimfbleak - talk to me? 15:00, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
- I did give the user some feedback... just fyi. ---kilbad (talk) 23:17, 31 March 2010 (UTC)
- sorry, I accept good faith Jimfbleak - talk to me? 05:58, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
I am sorry. This has gone on long enough. This GA fails. TeacherA (talk) 03:35, 23 April 2010 (UTC)