Talk:Rafael Nadal/GA1

GA Review

I'm putting this on hold for one week for the following concerns:

1. Weasel words in intro: "have led many to regard Nadal".
2. Family and early life section could be expanded. Is there any more info on his family?
3. Not enough info on his early life. It skips right into his interests in tennis. Surely he did something else than play tennis in his early years.
4. 2002-2004 seems too short for a subsection.
5. POV in 2006: "Fierce rivalry".
6. Too many one- and two-sentence paragraphs in 2006, 2007, and 2008 sections.
7. Playing style is largely unsourced; also contains a "currently". Avoid this term, as "currently" can become the past very quickly.
8. Does his natural right handedness need to be mentioned in more than one section?
9. The page could also use a copy edit to tighten up the prose, especially in the 2006, 2007, and 2008 sections.

Ten Pound Hammer and his otters • ^{(Broken clamshells•Otter chirps)} 10:48, 3 July 2008 (UTC)

• Forget it. I'm pulling the plug after only 3 days because I suck balls. Ten Pound Hammer and his otters • ^{(Broken clamshells•Otter chirps)} 16:39, 6 July 2008 (UTC)