Talk:Regina Elena-class battleship/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 06:45, 7 July 2013 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 06:45, 7 July 2013 (UTC)

• Not required, but might be a good idea to use |0 on inch-to-metric conversions
  • Think I got them all
• Add |adj=on to this conversion 13,000 metric tons (13,000 long tons; 14,000 short tons)
  • Done.
• Why are you switching from long tons to metric tons in the first para of the General characteristics section?
  • I think it was related to [confusion]
• Combine these: six twin turrets amidships.[3] These turrets also used electrical operation.
  • Done.
• Krupp armor or Krupp cemented armor?
  • Good catch.
• Italian licenses of photos OK, but should probably replace the PD-US tag with PD-1996 as there's no place or date of publication.
  • Will do.
• No DABs, and external links are good.
• One duplicate link.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:37, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Thanks for reviewing the article, Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 10:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)