Talk:Road to Rhode Island/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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My review is below. Please address each item line-by-line and I'll strike them as we go..

Lead

"It guest starred Victoria Principal as Dr. Amanda Rebecca, Brian Doyle-Murray as Luke..." Since there is no context to who these characters are, this read a bit weird. Could you either add a little context as to who they are, or just remove the character names altogether?
"...by the Road to comedy films." I'll bet a lot of people haven't even heard of these Road to movies. Can you add a bit of context to this too? Something like, "Road to movies of the 1940s?" Or "Road to comedy movies starring Bing Crosby and Bob Hope" or something like that?

Production

"...Brian Doyle-Murray as Luke..." Since we never hear who Luke is in the plot summary, we definitely need some context here.
"The episodes are a parody of the seven "Road to" comedy films starring Bing Crosby, Bob Hope, and Dorothy Lamour." You talk about the Road To connection at length at the start of the paragraph, then drop this sentence in. It feels like this should be the first sentence of the paragraph, not the third. Could you try moving it?

Reception

This link is dead.

I'll place this article on hold for now. Thanks! — Hun ter Ka hn 15:00, 16 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Please note that although he did not respond to the comments here, this user notified me at my talk page that he did indeed address them. As such, I'm now passing the article. Congrats! — Hun ter Ka hn 05:46, 24 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]