Talk:Rock Revolution/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Hello, this is where I will be reviewing Rock Revolution. I will do my best to finish the review tonight because I have standardized testing all this week.-- Gears of War 2 (NGG) 00:41, 20 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Extensive Review[edit]

Infobox

Try adding a link to ESRB's website when stating the rating. Also, the game was released in Europe right. ESRB doesn't govern in Europe.
Add a link talking about release dates.

Lead

Usually game articles consist of about 3 paragraphs in the lead: Intro, plot and reception. Because there is no plot because this is a strictly music game, try extending the lead. See Guitar Hero III for help.
In the second paragraph, try talking more about actual sales numbers and maybe different versions released.

Gameplay

"The Xbox 360 and PlayStation 3, the game is played using guitar and drum set peripherals. Konami released a drumkit for the game using a 7-pad layout, but a dedicated guitar was not manufactured for the game, requiring players to use Guitar Hero and Rock Band's guitar controllers." Try using this sentence to flesh out the development section.
"Wii guitar and drum controllers are not compatible with the game." I think your trying to say that the Wii controllers for Rock Band 2 and Guitar Hero 3 are not compatible. Please elaborate.
Make sure all citations come after punctuation marks.
" The DS version also supports vocals using the system's internal microphone, unlike the console version which does not[1][9], due to a request by Konami stating that it would "potentially cannibalize the Karaoke Revolution series" and make the game be compared to Rock Band (which are both developed by Harmonix).[2]" Who did Konami request to? This sentence is very confusing. Please fix it.

Pre-Release and Development

You don't have to mention that Gamespot made the report. Remove.
"A demo build" Take away the word build.
Try finding info on what inspired the way the instruments are built and try to flesh out the section. It is very weak.

Soundtrack

Try making this section longer or start an article devoted to the game's soundtrack. See List of songs in Guitar Hero: Aerosmith.

Recording Studio

Make it a part of the Gameplay section.

Patent litigation

Make it a part of the Development section.

References

Find more references. Refs like 1, 2, 3, 5, 18, and 19 are used A LOT.

Verdict[edit]

I am failing this article because there is just to much work to be done for this article to be on Hold.-- Gears of War 2 (NGG) 01:21, 20 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]