Talk:Roll cage

Deployable roll hoops[edit]

"A newer form of rollover protection is deployable roll hoops that are normally hidden within the body of a car."

To quote that piece above, whoever wrote that piece is 21 years behind with the times as if it written to make it look like if that invention was recent. That roll bar was pioneered on the Mercedes-Benz R129 in 1989, no other cars had it then. Donnie Park (talk) 11:51, 26 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bad writing[edit]

Can someone fix the formatting of the second paragraph? Apart from being written in a childish manner, it's all jumbled together without proper punctuation or capitalization (i.e. many words are capitalized unnecessarily). I don't know enough about the subject matter to correct it.

Also it looks like someone has added an inline comment disagreeing with the author! It makes it very difficult to read. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 80.254.146.140 (talk) 14:39, 14 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

If you see something wrong, remove it! That's what Wikipedia is all about. Next time, remove the offending material and/or reword it when you find it problematic . Jparenti (talk) 10:49, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]