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I like how you formatted your article in chronological order, it helped me understand things more clearly. There are a few things, however, I think is important that you should add. You should add more information about how and why she fell in love with basketball and say whether or not she played during her years at college. I think you should also add a sentence or two about what she is currently doing if she is still alive. Or if she isn't, add information about how her coaching career ended. In your article, you should also insert links. For instance, when you mentioned the colleges she attended and/or coached at, you should link them so others can could see more information about these schools if they are interested. For example, Bergen Community College
Overall, I think you did a great job!!! Mirandaboes (talk) 19:49, 24 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
