Talk:Roy's Wedding/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 16:23, 30 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comment Why aren't there any project banners on the talk page? It's quit important for sorting. Glimmer721 ^talk 00:50, 8 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Link The Office in the infobox
Where is the running time referenced?
Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
In the episode should be "In this episode"
In plot, "8AM" should be "8 am", as per MOS:TIME
% should be wrote out fully as "percent"
"On Twitter, David Denman" remove David as first mention is above, as per WP:MOS
Link NBC in ratings
" 6.8/10" write out fully
Ref. 1 has WP:DASH issues
How is Zap2it a reliable source?
Same goes for OfficeTally
Ref. 5 should have TVLine linked
Ref. 11: Double quotes (") should be single quotes ('), as per WP:MOS, and curly quotes should be regular, in ref. 11, 13
Why do some references have publishers and others don't?
Add alt text to the images

On hold until the issues are addressed. TBr and ley 17:50, 9 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I believe I have addressed all the issues NoD'ohnuts (talk) 06:09, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Actually, not all of them, but I got the ones you missed. Passing. TBr and ley 14:45, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]