Talk:Ryan Boyle

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Good articleRyan Boyle has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
October 26, 2010Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on September 5, 2010.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Ryan Boyle, who holds the Ivy League lacrosse career scoring record, once set the Maryland high school football single-season pass completion percentage record?

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:27, 26 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Overall this article is pretty good. Here are the issues I found:

  • "As a sophomore option offense quarterback, he totaled 812 yards rushing, five touchdowns and 465 passing yards, including four touchdowns." can be reworded to '812 yards and five touchdowns rushing and...passing.'
  • Write out what USILA is on one of the early mentions of it.
  • "as part of t 14-point 3-game" of a
  • Any playoff info for the 2003 championship? 2002 and 2004 are noted so thought I'd ask.
    • Actually, he is not mentioned in any NYT or Baltimore Sun articles, so for the purpose of WP, he did nothing notable in either of the 2003 games.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:54, 26 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Boyle scored 2 goals and had 3 assists in the Philadelphia Barrage 16–15 overtime loss" two/three
  • "Boyle's father, Darby, played attack for West Point in the late 1960s and his older brother Michael played for Georgetown." I presume both played lacrosse? Make that clearer.

Not too much to fix. I'll put it on hold and pass when it's done. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:27, 26 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good, GA now passes. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:05, 26 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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