Talk:São Tomé and Príncipe at the 2016 Summer Paralympics

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Review: April 16, 2018. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:19, 15 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do this one. Courcelles (talk) 20:19, 15 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Short, sweet, and not much to comment on...

"São Tomé and Príncipe first competed at the Olympic Games at the" Two "at the"s in rapid succession.
"The country participated on six" -> "The country participated in the Olympics on six"
"São Tomé and Príncipe participated in the Rio Paralympic Games from 7 to 18 September 2016.[5]" This is kinda choppy to be here, basically it is the first sentence of the article again.
Did they have a flagbearer for the closing ceremony?

Otherwise, looks good. Courcelles (talk) 20:29, 15 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Courcelles: I believe that is all of your points actioned except for whether the country had a flag bearer for the closing ceremony because I could not locate a reliable source to verify it. MWright96 (talk) 06:11, 16 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Very well. Then, this passes. Courcelles (talk) 17:53, 16 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]