Talk:SMS Württemberg (1917)/GA1
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 22:26, 18 January 2020 (UTC)
I will take this one, comments to follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 22:26, 18 January 2020 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
- No issues identified
Development[edit]
- additional funds for the Navy: suggest "additional funds for the Kaiserliche Marine (Imperial Navy)". The term is used in the lead but not main body of article.
- Good idea
- As work on the last member of the class began: I think it needs to explicitly specify at this point that Württemberg is that last member.
- Done
- to take advantage Wilhelm's good mood: should that be "to take advantage of Wilhelm's good mood"?
- Good catch
Description[edit]
- Inconsistency in text and infobox as to number of 8.8cm guns.
- Corrected
- Ditto for the minimum armor thickness for the turrets.
- Fixed
- No mention of cruising range in body of article.
- Added
Construction and cancellation[edit]
- No issues identified
References[edit]
- Hildebrand et al: no isbn?
- Not that I can find. Curiously, the books don’t have them printed, and there’s no entry in Worldcat for the 8th volume.
Other stuff[edit]
- Image tags check out OK
- No dupe or dab links
- No external links so checks for these not necessary
A tidy article with minimal issues. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 03:34, 25 January 2020 (UTC)