Talk:SS Chief Wawatam/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: GreatLakesShips (talk · contribs) 00:01, 4 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

As this is my first GA review, it may take some time to complete. I'll start working on it tomorrow. GreatLakesShips (talk) 00:01, 4 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

aka the Chief → nicknamed the Chief. I also recommend adding this in the "Ship nickname" section of the infobox.
Done

Change "home" ported to "based".
Done

Change all instances of the Chief to Chief Wawatam. See this discussion regarding the usage of the definite article in front of ship's name.
Done

The article uses both "she" and "it" to refer to the vessel. Both words are acceptable, but they should be consistent throughout the article.
Done

Recommend removing all instances of SS from the lead and body.
Done

No need to have Skull Cave in italics.
Done

Recommend changing "this service ended in 1984 and the Chief lay in mothballs for four years in Mackinaw City" to "this service ended in 1984, when Chief Wawatam was laid up for four years in Mackinaw City".
Done

@Doug Coldwell: That's all I found. GreatLakesShips (talk) 13:22, 4 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@GreatLakesShips: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk)

I've made some minor adjustments to the article. GreatLakesShips (talk) 17:21, 4 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Doug Coldwell: Good to go. GreatLakesShips (talk) 17:21, 4 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]