Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2014/GA1
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:33, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
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A good number of Eurovision articles still pending, so I will take this on shortly! --K. Peake 17:33, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead[edit]
- Infobox looks good!
- "though both entries failed to qualify for the grand final" → "though the entries failed to qualify for either grand final" or something similar
- "in the first semi-final," → "in the first semi-final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014,"
- "held four days later, where it" → "that was held four days later, where the nation"
Background[edit]
- Great job on not re-introducing the broadcaster like you did the past few times!
- "for both 2012 and 2013" → "for 2012 and 2013"
- "in the previous year's contest." → "in the Eurovision Song Contest 2013." with the wikilink
Before Eurovision[edit]
Internal selection[edit]
- Video is a neat addition!
- "a month after the conclusion of the 2013 contest" this part is not mentioned by the source
- "On 13 March," → "On 13 March 2014,"
- Remove target on snippets
- Target "Maybe" to Maybe (Valentina Monetta song) on the first mention instead
- Wikilink pre-order
- Target dance to Dance music
- "Media outlets suggested that these" → "Media outlets suggested these"
- "the following day, and that the presence" → "the following day and the presence"
- "program on 14 March" → "programme on 14 March 2014"
- Remove comma after "Maybe"
- "so that the song's meaning could be" → "so that the song could be"
- "of Monetta's studio album" → "of Monetta's third studio album"
- Remove excess spacing and the release year of the album in brackets
Promotion[edit]
- "they were shot at" → "the former video was shot at"
- "staged a promotion tour, appearing on 5 April" → "staged a promotional tour, appearing on 5 April 2014"
- "staged to serve" → "that was staged to serve"
- "in the United Kingdom." → "of the United Kingdom."
At Eurovision[edit]
- Change the United Kingdom to the UK because you have already mentioned the country's full name
- "was held at Copenhagen City Hall" → "was held in Copenhagen" as the source reflects
- "for the Eurovision Song Contest" → "for the Eurovision Song Contest 2014"
- Img looks good!
- "she was joined" → "Monetta was joined"
- "with bluish a fan-like cloth arrangement" → "with a fan-like cloth arrangement" unless [23] mentions bluish, then move it to being the word after a
- "was by art director" → "was handled by art director"
- Target grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2014#Grand final
- "San Marino qualified for" → "the nation qualified for"
- [1] should also be at the end of the above sentence, as it backs that up
- "In the grand final, held on," → "In the grand final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014, held on,"
- "marked nation's highest placing" → "marked the nation's highest placing"
- "both the semi-finals" → "both of the semi-finals"
- "were also broadcast online" → "was also available online"
Voting[edit]
- "of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014." → "of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014, respectively."
- "Junior Eurovision Song Contest 2013 Michele Perniola." → "Junior Eurovision Song Contest 2013, Michele Perniola."
Points awarded to San Marino[edit]
- The second table is incorrectly titled Points awarded by San Marino (Grand final)
Points awarded by San Marino[edit]
- Good
Detailed jury voting results[edit]
- The members are not backed up by [41] and Ghiotti should not have two dashes by her credits
References[edit]
- Copyvio score looks amazing at 7.4%!!!
- Nice job using the tool to archive!
- Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 27
Final comments and verdict[edit]
- On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but I am going to sleep soon so this won't be a same day pass like your others unfortunately. --K. Peake 21:30, 7 February 2021 (UTC)