Talk:Sarah Stewart (basketball)

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Good articleSarah Stewart (basketball) has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starSarah Stewart (basketball) is part of the Australia women's national wheelchair basketball team at the 2012 Summer Paralympics series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
August 26, 2013Good article nomineeListed
December 8, 2013Good topic candidatePromoted
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on October 16, 2012.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Katie Hill, Clare Nott and Sarah Stewart are all members of the Australia women's national wheelchair basketball team that won the bronze medal at the 2008 Paralympics and the silver medal in 2012?
Current status: Good article

Article improvement efforts[edit]

Efforts are being made to add content to this article to get it improved enough to nominate for Good Article. Efforts to improve the article are nominally being based on the article about Lauren Jackson given the sheer amount of information available about female wheelchair basketball players when compared to other sports like goalball. Hence, the article could really use a good copy edit, maintaining as much information as possible for the short term until all the content is in to determine what belongs and does not. The goal is to nominate the article for Good Article by the end of September. In the mean time, the article has also been nominated for Did You Know. --LauraHale (talk) 10:50, 17 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Orphaned references in Sarah Stewart (basketball)[edit]

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Reference named "apc":

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 15:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Then we can talk! The Rambling Man (talk) 16:03, 14 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

It should be fine now. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:21, 19 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments plus

  • Is it 3 point or 3.0 point?
    • checkY 3.0 player, but when they talk about the 3 point class, they mean 3.0 and 3,5 point players. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Not sure we should be wikilinking common geographical terms like London or Australia.
    • checkY Unlinked Australia, kept London for consistency with other cities. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "League (WNWBL) an the National Wheelchair" typo?
  • "since 2002.She has" space needed?
  • "2012, 2010, 2009, 2008 and 2004" etc. Chronological order is preferred.
  • "Career highlights include being" not exactly prose, more of a CV, perhaps rephrase for normal lead prose.
  • "Sarah Stewart was born on 13" no need to repeat Sarah.
  • "This resulted in her being in a wheelchair" no, it resulted in her needing to use a wheelchair for mobility.
  • Again, check for "She... She... She... She..." which makes for dull prose.
    • checkY Always a problem with any biographical article. Tried to reduce this. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In 2004 she earned the Sydney... " new para so "In 2004, Stewart...
  • "Razorbacks.[11][3]" ref order. Check others.
    • Ref order is sensitive to small editing changes. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • " 52-44" en-dash. Please fix this issue in the other GANs you have to save me from having to comment on each and every one every time!
    • checkY Done. Will be checking the others in due course. If you want to raise an RfC to get rid of the ndashes and mdashes, I'll vote for it. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:07, 24 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "She was part of the silver medal " -> "Stewart was part of the silver medal-winning team".
  • List stats table in chronological order (again, please do this in all other GANs).
  • Why is PTS not in bold (again....)
  • Avoid SHOUTING in the refs (e.g. ATHENS)

Still on hold. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:39, 24 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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