Talk:Saru Jayaraman

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Good Wiki Article Criteria (taken from Wikipedia): 1. Well-written -- Nice organization on different aspects on her life and activism. She does have a lot of awards! -- You mention many different organizations throughout the article, if articles are available, do include links to them as the reader can be provided with a larger picture and learn about the different groups she interacted with 2. Verifiable with no original research -- Quite a few sources from the subject of the article, but since it is an article about a person, should it be fine? 3. Broad in its coverage -- Overall, it is well-written and the article does provide a good picture of her life -- Doesn't go into much detail (except for the list of awards) 4. Neutral -- I think the article maintains a relatively objective stance throughout. Great! 5. Illustrated, if possible, by images --if it is possible, I think adding images will help with this sort of article Lsim2 (talk) 01:10, 2 December 2016 (UTC)lsim2[reply]

I am honestly blown away by this article and have learned so much about a wonderful woman! I definitely agree with Lina on the in-depth detailed, the variety of topics and aspects of her life you expand on, as well as the tone of neutrality you maintained.

Here are some suggestions:

Under her "Professional Life and Other Activism," you wrote, "In 1992, Saru Jayaraman started a non-profit called Women and Youth Supporting Each Other (W.Y.S.E)" I'm interested in how this non-profit developed and what impacts it has had?
you know how on the right side of a biography wikipage, there's this little blurb that lists the person's birthday, birthplace, spouse, number of children? I think it would be beneficial to your article, no, I mean, I don't it would be cool tbh

For example, Yuri Kochiyama

Xchang20 (talk) 19:52, 2 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]