Talk:Scary Monsters (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:31, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"a stand-alone plot which is unconnected to the series' wider mythology, or the overarching fictional history" → "a stand-alone plot which is unconnected to the overarching fictional history of The X-Files"
- Rephrased.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Scary Monsters" was written based largely around the teaser.". Huh?
- Rephrased.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Perhaps an image for the section
- I can't find a suitable picture.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Harrison had first appeared in the Spotnitz-penned eighth season episode "Alone". Jenkins' character was created and named in memory of a The X-Files internet fan and prolific writer of fan fiction of the same name, who had died of cancer on February 10, 2001" citation/reference needed
- It's reference 5.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"fucking". Perhaps "f***ing", etc., or something where, well, you know, anybody can read the article
- This shouldn't be done per WP:CENSOR.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"During the filming of "Scary Monsters", the cast and crew of The X-Files learned that the series would not be renewed for a tenth season.". Re-write to: "During the filming of the episode, The X-Files' was canceled by the Fox network, meaning that the show would not return for a tenth season, etc"
- Rephrased.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Unlink Fox as it is already linked above
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Link Nielsen household rating to Nielsen ratings
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ref. 5: "Fox Home Entertainment". Firstly, it should be "20th Century Fox Home Entertainment". Secondly, unlink it as it is already linked above
- Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Per other articles, and what you have told me before, it should be "XFiles.com" not "TheXFiles.com"
- I know this is confusing, but there are two websites: XFiles.com and TheXFiles.com. Web Archive has archived bits and pieces from both. For this episode, it is "XFiles.com", and not "TheXFiles.com".--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

On hold. Great work! TBran dl ey 17:55, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I believe everything has been addressed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]