Talk:Seahorse Seashell Party/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Matthew R Dunn (talk · contribs) 15:39, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

Hello, I shall be conducting the review. -- Matthew RD 15:39, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Well written: See notes below
2. Verifiability: See notes below
3. Broadness in coverage: ✓ Pass
4. Neutrality: ✓ Pass
5. Stability: No edit conflicts ✓ Pass
6. Images: One non-free image with appropriate fair use rationale. Other two images are free. ✓ Pass

Comments

• "The episode featured guest appearances in Ioan Gruffudd, Dee Bradley Baker, Debra Wilson, and several other actors and actresses." Do you mean the episode featured guest appearances from Ioan Gruffudd, etc?
  • Done. Gage (talk) 08:38, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
• "He was also willing to do another crossover event if this one receives successful ratings." I take it the "he" is still MacFarlane.
  • Done. Gage (talk) 08:38, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
• "The episode title and subplot is based of off "Drinking Out of Cups"," the of off bit is confusing, I suggest a reword of the sentence.
  • Removed, it was original research. Gage (talk) 08:38, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
• This source is a blog.
  • Done. Gage (talk) 08:38, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
• "Brian at one point hallucinates Stewie quoting a line from Time Bandits in Syncro-Vox then Brian runs pushes a wall and falls which is also a reference from Time Bandits." is unsourced.
  • Removed as original research. Gage (talk) 08:38, 2 December 2011 (UTC)

I'll place the article on hold for seven days. -- Matthew RD 01:09, 2 December 2011 (UTC)

Nice one, Gage. Thanks for addressing the issues. I am pleased to say the article passes. Congrats! -- Matthew RD 17:54, 2 December 2011 (UTC)