Talk:Shanta Das Manandhar

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Creator reverted my edits on this article. Thought I'd highlight that there were several copy issues with this articled, that unless resolve, makes this article need a cleanup.
1. He has published more than 24 books for children's - Simply grammatically incorrect. Correct phrasing could be: He has published more than 24 children's books. Or he's an author of 24 children's books. See Roald Dahl and Dr. Seuss for examples. <.br>
2. "He was born in Jhoche, Kathmandu and schooled in JP school [1] and has completed Bachelor level." - This section could use a bit more clarity, but the editor refuses to have that fixed either. Hope this helps! --Infogapp1 (talk) 13:19, 24 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Infogapp1- You are right, the article needs clean up. Please help to do so. But while doing so, please also be aware of Nepali education system and the context. Regards. nirmal (talk) 14:01, 24 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I believe being specific may help. I didn't alter any information in your copy. In your copy, you mentioned he studied at Bachelor's level. There was no indication he completed it, and there was no suggestion in my edit that he didn't. I guess something being on mobile may be limiting the information you're seeing? My edit was done completely in good faith (as you will see in the rest of my contributions in this project), so I'm a little perplexed with the reversion? --Infogapp1 (talk) 14:05, 24 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]