Talk:Shayne Gostisbehere/GA1
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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 16:59, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.
If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)
I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.
Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs)
Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.
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Prose[edit]
Lede[edit]
- the minor affiliate - either say and link "minor team", or link "minor affiliate", otherwise the link is a bit out of place. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:27, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
- You link Florida but not Connecticut. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:27, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
- From there, he played three seasons of college ice hockey with the Union Dutchmen of the ECAC Hockey - is this still in Connecticut? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:27, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
- Breakout rookie season - I thought he had already played for them in prior years? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:27, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
- Who called it a breakout year? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:27, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
- After the heights of the 2017–18 season - fluff. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:27, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
- Lede should mention his international stuff. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:27, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
General[edit]
- Wow, Jai alai looks like squash with a wooden lacrosse style bat. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
- "Panthers’ Incredible"... Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
- What is AAA? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
- Suitable link for travelling teams? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
- Despite being drafted by the Flyers in 2012, - this should probably be expanded upon in the prose. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
- When you say "breakout", is this a statistical thing, or a quote? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
- Union's tournament run came to an end in the following game, when Matthew Peca of Quinnipiac scored a hat trick in the first three minutes and 12 seconds of the East Regional finals.[ - final score? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 06:39, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
Review meta comments[edit]
- I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:59, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
- Lee Vilenski All edits have been addressed, and additional comments have been left above. — GhostRiver 14:02, 28 September 2021 (UTC)