Talk:She Ain't You/GA1

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Reviewer: Jivesh boodhun (talk · contribs) 12:17, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. I will review this article. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:17, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Question[edit]

Nooooo. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:41, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Media Review[edit]

  • The sample should be 25 seconds long per WP:Music samples.  Done
  • The sample can remain only if you improve the rationale. If you need help, tell me. Do not hesitate.
  • The image is the music video section looks fine to me.
★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:22, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox[edit]

  • |border = yes >>> should be added  Done
  • Remove (radio) It is used only when a song is serviced to radio exclusively. For example, "Put It in a Love Song".  Done
  • Add the year of recording
    • Not sure what year it was recorded. Album notes don't mention it. Oz talk 12:33, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Let it be. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:42, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

  • as the fourth US single from Brown's fourth >>> serving as the fourth US single.......... Done
  • The song received a mixed response from critics. >>> The song received mixed to positive reviews form music critics.  Done
Note:You should know how to differentiate between mixed and mixed to positive.
  • In the United States, "She Ain't You" reached number five on the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart, number seventeen on the Pop Songs chart, and number twenty-seven on the Billboard Hot 100.  Done

>>> "She Ain't You" reached number five on the US Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart, number 17 on the Pop Songs chart, and number 27 on the US Billboard Hot 100 chart.  Done

Not done. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:29, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Note: I suggest you read WP:NUMBERS.
 Done Oz talk 12:47, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • The song also charted in the top-thirty in Australia and New Zealand. >>> The song also charted within the top-thirty on charts in Australia and New Zealand.  Done
Question: Was it released in these territories. Or is this a case similar to Na, na, na, diva is a female version of a hustla / Of a hustla, of a, of a hustla / Na, na, na, diva is a female version of a hustla / Of a hustla, of a, of a hustla
No, it was exactly like "Diva". Oz talk 12:55, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
So you have to make a little story. Lol.... Even though the song was not released outside the US.... blablabla  Done
Not done. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:30, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Check 'Chart performance' section. Oz talk 07:44, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
The lead too should have that. And these is one more comment above. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:53, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Oz talk 12:47, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • An accompanying music video >>> The accompanying music video for the single  Done
  • and sees Brown >>> and features Brown  Done
  • The song has been performed >>> Brown performed "She Ain't You" live  Done
★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:40, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Background and composition[edit]

I will continue at night. For now, i have to go and listen to some of this girl's music. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:49, 6 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I will complete this on Thursday. Right now, i have exams. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:31, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
That's fine by me. Good luck with your exams! Oz talk 07:44, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Awwwwww thanks. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:56, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

When Will I Continue >>> After November 16, 2011[edit]

★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 10:59, 1 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Ok then. Oz talk 11:11, 1 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception[edit]

  • from or of?
  • the sample gave >>> It still gives, right?
  • added that its "definitely a song for the ladies ... maybe even for pop star Rihanna." >>> its?

Chart performance[edit]

  • On the issue dated April 2, 2011
Expalnation: We say; For the chart issue dated April 2, 2011, otherwise use For the week ending April 2, 2011.
  • Make the necessary corrections elsewhere ^^^
  • on the Billboard Hot 100 >>> on the US Billboard Hot 100
  • for selling 35,000 digital copies >>> for selling more than 35,000 digital copies
  • On the New Zealand Singles Chart, "She Ain't You" debuted at number 37, and later peaked at number 27,[23] and spent a total of seven weeks on the chart >>> On the New Zealand Singles Chart, "She Ain't You" debuted at number 37, peaked at number 27, and spent a total of seven weeks on the chart.

Music video[edit]

  • performs his iconic dance moves >>> is that a quote? Iconic? <<< Are you sure about the word iconic? If no, please put in between quotes and the as stated by bla bla bla thing.
  • The video opens with a dedication, saying, >>> The video opens with the following dedication,
  • in a '80s >>> in a 1980s
  • Link fedora
  • In between this scene >>> Does not sound goo. Rephrase or tell me, is it scenes that you wanted to write?
  • Again, from or of?
  • the same magic >>> A quote?

Live performances[edit]

  • 18,000 fans >>> All of them were fans? Lol.
    • I changed it to an audience of 18,000 people. Does that make sense? Lol. Oz talk 21:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Credits and personnel[edit]

  • No issues

Charts and certifications[edit]

  • No issues

Release dates[edit]

    • No issues

References[edit]

  • Ref 26, Digital Spy should not be italicized.
  • Ref 27 publisher is Complex Media Network
  • Ref 35 Remove UK R&B Chart.
  • Ref 36 Remove UK Singles Chart.

Jivesh's feelings[edit]

Very nice work. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 10:31, 20 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
Congratulations. This article has passes. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 04:09, 21 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! :D Oz talk 05:10, 21 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
You are welcome. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 05:11, 21 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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