Talk:Songbird Sings the Classics/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 19:25, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]


  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):
    b. (citations to reliable sources):
    c. (OR):
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):
    b. (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

This should be a nice, smooth review! --K. Peake 19:25, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead[edit]

  • Infobox looks good!
  • Add a comma after Regine Velasquez in the first sentence
Done
  • "as its sponsor." → "as the sponsor."
Done
Done
Done
  • Remove the introduction to Gerard Salonga per it being done in the body
Removed and tweaked
  • "the intimate show and Velasquez's and" → "the intimate show, and Velasquez's and"
Done

Thanks for the initial comments. Actioned per responses above. Pseud 14 (talk) 20:52, 8 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Pseud 14 I meant pipe to the plural for the 1960s and 1970s music articles; do this in the body too, please. --K. Peake 08:32, 9 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I see what you mean. Done (I think) Pseud 14 (talk) 13:08, 9 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Background and development[edit]

  • "It marked her first collaboration" → "It marked Velasquez's first collaboration"
  • "with his sister Lea Salonga." → "with his sister Lea." per MOS:SAMESURNAME
Done above

Synopsis and reception[edit]

  • "into a Henry Mancini tribute number," → "into a Mancini tribute number,"
  • "The next number saw her perform" → "The next number saw Velasquez perform"
  • "she stood next to" → "Velasquez stood next to"
  • "He highlighted how" → "Cruz highlighted how"
Done above

Broadcast and recordings[edit]

  • Use the full name of RPN
  • Wikilink live album
  • Mention that the certification was in the Philippines and how many units it represents
I added the number of units sold and included a source for shipments of albums required to achieve platinum status. Same source can be found in her discography. As for adding Philippines, the certifying body (PARI) already mentions that, so I think it would be redundant to add it again.

Set list[edit]

  • Good

See also[edit]

  • Good

References[edit]

Added

External links[edit]

  • Good

Final comments and verdict[edit]

  •  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; shouldn't take long at all especially with your speed! --K. Peake 08:32, 9 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for taking up this review K. Peake. I have addressed your comments and provided my responses above. Let me know if I missed anything. Pseud 14 (talk) 13:08, 9 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • ✓ Pass now, great job on this! --K. Peake 20:17, 9 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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