Talk:Spella Caffè/GA1

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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 08:26, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]


Hey there! I'm gonna review this in a shortt while. Really nice to see you in the GAN backlog again! I have another GAN I'm reviewing and am quite busy IRL so I chose this as it's the shortest, hope that's okay. GeraldWL 08:26, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Gerald Waldo Luis Thanks for reviewing! I have tried to address your concerns below, if you're able to take another look. I've left the images alone and I would prefer to keep mention of the Art Deco logo design within the article body. I agree, some better/different images would be better and I have this on my "to do" list, but I hope they are good enough for GA status in the meantime. ---Another Believer (Talk) 13:55, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Images and refs and those stuff[edit]

  • The logo is kinda just a generic text not within the threshold of originality, so a higher quality ver of it can be uploaded to Commons with maybe a trademark notice if appropriate.
    • I do not upload logos to Wikimedia Commons, but perhaps someone else will copy the file (or upload a higher quality version) to Commons at a later date. ---Another Believer (Talk) 13:56, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • The other pics look okay and freely licensed, although the infobox exterior image, if you have the chance to revisit, I think a front wide shot would be more neat, like y'know, Wes Anderson symmetry. But it's not a GA concern.
  • The third image closing up to the logo feels repetitive, since the second photo already prominently features the logo. You can just make an infobox logo caption stating something like "Logo, featuring an Art Deco design" with the supporting ref. You can then remove the second paragraph in Description, which I think is in an awkward position.
  • Alternatively, if you can get in the cafe, an interior picture in 4:3 aspect ratio would be a nice alternative to the close up pic.
  • What do you think about putting mdy template to generate such date format for the refs?
  • The infobox has an Owner parameter, does Andrea Spella still own the caffe?
  • Some of the ref's websites/pubs are linked, but some are not.

Prose[edit]

  • I think the lead can be expanded a bit, there's certainly more to the article than just its opening.
    • I added that the business has garnered a positive reception and has been cited as an influence for others. ---Another Believer (Talk) 13:57, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • They started the business as a cart?
  • "The business has an Art Deco logo." -- I would rephrase it a bit, the section is the only place where this sentence is appropriate but it still feels awkward. Maybe something like "The cafe also features a logo styled in Art Deco."
  • Link to espresso would be nice
  • "town --hand-pulled" could fix the dash here.
  • There's frequent mentions of "Andrea Spella", to my knowledge, following the first mention its preferable to just refer by surname.
    • I agree, but in this case sometimes I need to disambiguate Spella the person from Spella the business. ---Another Believer (Talk) 13:53, 15 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Combination request: paragraph 1&2, 3&4&5
  • A link to amp would be nice
  • "In 2022, Spella"-- "Shortly after, Spella" to avoid repetition from prev sentence
  • " 2,750-square-foot" adding convert to sq meter would be nice
  • In last para: link dark roast, bourbon coffee, stout
  • "Writers said" is kinda ambiguous. "Other writers of the newspaper" sounds better.
  • Link Caffè crema and Rome
  • The last quote in paragraph can totally be paraphrased. My efforts are: "and recommends it "for a quick espresso (sipped standing, of course) or an early afternoon affogato, where hot espresso is poured over a scoop of gelato", but recommended workers taking their drinks out, noting the "barely enough room to wait"."
  • "In Best Places: Portland (2010)" --> "In the book Best Places: Portland (2010)"
  • "focused on its Rancilio lever espresso machine"-- pretty sure the point of the quote won't change by removing this part.
  • "This one’s for the grownups. For grownups who" --> "This one’s for the grownups [...] who"
  • For last sentence: "Eater Portland called Spella "a proud homage to Italian coffee making"."

Overall[edit]

I did some last changes, and after putting the article against the GAC, I think it looks all good, it's clear and neat, and I don't notice any more problems. Good job once again! Promoting~ GeraldWL 10:49, 16 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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