Talk:Spring of Life (song)/GA1

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 07:06, 6 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Firstly correct the labum name, it should be Level3 per the article, not other abbreviations throughout. Check.
it became the groups third single to top the Billboard Hot 100 in Japan --> Correct name of the chart is Japan Hot 100
Yusuke Tanaka commissioned the accompanying music video --> Not commissioned, directed
You have the same issue with the background section as other Japanese group songs article, going overboard with previous releases' commercial success
In April 2012, "Spring of Life" was certified gold by RIAJ in for shipments of 100,000 units in Japan --> In April 2012, "Spring of Life" was certified gold by the Recording Industry Association of Japan (RIAJ) in for shipments of 100,000 units in Japan
Move the credits section after the track list part
Can you please copy edit the music video part? It seems that the flow is not correct. And information about highest viewed video is of no importance if it comes from YouTube and not from third party sources
Use en-dash in the reference titles for the connecting dashes

Thats all, not much to do, on hold for seven days. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 10:50, 11 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Finished all adjustments, grammar fixes, spelling and re-arranging. If anything is wrong or worrying, please comment :) GirlsAlouud (talk · contribs} 05:32, 12 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]