Talk:Start Over (Beyoncé song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 23:37, 15 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Formats are not to be included on song articles. It was not just released digitally, was it?
and produced by the first two. --> and produced by the former two.
"Start Over" received mixed to positive reviews from music critics who noted --> comma after critics
The placement of the song on the track-listing were criticized by critics --> The placement of the song on the album's track listing was criticized by critics
Although set to showcase Knowles' fourth album 4, "Start Over" was noticeably missing from her set list for the 4 Intimate Nights with Beyoncé revue. --> Since it wasn't performed, why does this matter?

which contains pop, "angst-ridden pop-rock[10] and soul elements. --> which contains elements of "angst-ridden pop-rock", pop and soul music.

Everything looks good there. There were a few minor grammar issues that I corrected, nothing major.

Overall, this is very well written article that has very little issues. Once the ones stated above are dealt with, I will have no problem passing the article. Statυs (talk) 00:20, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you so much. All done except the links. I checked them and they look fine... :D My love is love (talk) 21:34, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- You are welcome. I am passing the article. great work! Statυs (talk) 22:31, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]