Talk:Stuka Jr./GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:09, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Will review this one also. MWright96 (talk) 14:09, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "but in actually Stuka's younger brother" - but is Stuka's younger brother
• "and his tights include designs looking like the Luftwaffe's Balkenkreuz insignia," - representing
• "Some source list a "Stuka Jr." wrestling in the 1990s" - sources

Personal life

• "Insolito, Espacial and Oso Negro Jr. are believed to be Stuka Jr.'s nephews but that has not been officially confirmed." - change the text in bold to this and this whole sentence needs a reliable source

Professional wrestling career

• "Stuka Jr. made his professional wrestling debut in 2002 after training with his older brother Stuka as well as repspected lagunero trainer El Moro." - remove "repspected"

Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2005–present)

• "teaming with Chamaco Valaguez Jr., and Sensei to defeat Pandilla Guerrera(Arkangel de la Muerte, El Koreano and Hooligan)." - a space is needed between "Guerrera" and the opening parentheses
• "In CMLL he was mainly working in the opening matches while receiving additional training from CMLL's" - its
• "on the undercard of CMLL 75th Anniversary Show." - of the
• Wikilink undercard to [[Card (sports)}] for non-wrestling readers

Los Bombadieros (2008–2013)

• The second paragraph is not comfortable being read at the moment and will need to be separated into two paragraphs. I would suggest it be split into two before his participation in the 2010 Universal Championship tournament.
• "The first three rounds of the tournament took place on June 22, 2008, and saw" - rewrite this text so it reads The tournament's first three round took place on June 22, 2008.
• "Stuka Jr. and Flash defeated Astro Boy and Molotov in the first round, the Los Guerreros Tuareg team of Nitro and Skandalo in the quarter final and Bronco and Diamante Negro in the semi final." - a hypen is needed between "quarter final" and "semi final"
• "in the final on June 28 to win the Arena Colise Tag Team Championship." - typo; Coliseo
• "Throughout late 2009" - This should be late 2008
• Wikilink PPV to Pay-per-view
• "but the Coliseo Tag Team title was not on." - was not contested.
• "At the same time they announced an eight-team tournament to crown a new trios champion." - the new champions.
• "The top half of the bracket took place on December 22, 2009, and the bottom half of the bracket took place" - occurred for variety
• "Stuka Jr. and Metal Blanco won a Lucha de Apuesta, masks vs. hair match. Stuka Jr. and partner originally looked like they " - appeared
• "and was now one third of the champions, alongside Stuka Jr. and Metro" - a period should be added to end this sentence
• "initiated by Namajague's attempts to cheat his way to victory over Stuka Jr. Stuka Jr. and Fuego" - Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this

Various teams (2013–2016)

• "tournament that would take place from May to July 2013" - that took place
• "on four different occasions in 2015 and 2016." - between

Ring of Honor (2016–present)

• "where he lost to eventual tournament winner Marty Scurll" - its eventual winner

Professional wrestling style and persona

• "For this move Stuka Jr. climb to the top rope," - climbs
• "then he leaps backward in a twisting motion, leaping over the top ring post" - leaps backward in a twisting motion over the top ring post
• "performing a Monkey Flip off the entrance ramp," - monkey flip
• "especially for headline matches such a the" - as
• "to holding one of the mid-card championships" - to claiming one of the mid-card titles

References

• References 1, 19, 35 and 54 have redirect links that will need repairing with the appropriate archive links
• References 11, 12, 13, 14 and should have their links repaired otherwise the links should be left out but not the entire references because of their usefulness
• References 9, 15 are missing the authors of their respective articles
• Reference 27 is missing the publisher of the work
• We don't usually use YouTube videos unless they're from an verified account. Either find a reliable online source or reformat the reference to not include the YT link but the actual program the footage came from
• The hyphen in Reference 52 should be replaced by an en dash

Unfortunately, I believe that the article does not meet the standards of Wikipedia, so I will have to fail the review. However, I will suggest that the nominator implement all of the points raised in this review before re-nominating the article at GAN. MWright96 (talk) 15:52, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

• I have addressed everything but the YouTube video, I will track down a reference for that. A shame it was failed since they were easy fixes, but that's just how it goes. I will find a source, read though for copy editing and then back in the GAN it'll go. MPJ-DK (talk) 23:53, 30 November 2018 (UTC)