Talk:Stuka Jr./GA2

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:03, 2 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Might as well knock the number of pending 2018 sports GANs to zero, I'll review this shortly. Wizardman 15:03, 2 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Image and source review is done. Image is good, Sources are mostly good. Only issue I found is that the publisher for Stuka destronó a Hechicero del Campeonato Histórico Semicompleto NWA is wrong, it's definitely not MSN. Prose review to follow. Wizardman 20:58, 2 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

MSN publishes "MedioTiempo" their urls used to be msn.mediotiempo.com - I will research to make sure that's still the case but last I checked it was owned by MSN. MPJ-DK (talk) 21:36, 2 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Apparently that changed quite a while back, their website does not show any business connections to MSN any more, I removed it from the sources. MPJ-DK (talk) 21:41, 2 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Was unaware of that, makes sense after double-checking myself. Lead appears good, will check the rest tomorrow. Wizardman 02:01, 4 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, here's the prose review:

" Stuka Jr's, primarily in the Laguneros area." huh? that's the full sentence, not sure if a piece of it got deleted by accident or what but not sure what it's trying to say.
"older brother Stuka as well as lagunero trainer El Moro." this kinda goes off the previous point. If it's meant to be discussing Comarca Lagunera, then link to that to make it clearer. In either case Lagunero should presumably be capitalized if that's the case. (i tried looking at other articles to figure it out but was only coming up with fellow wrestlers of the area that, by extension, have that same issue)
"to look like aviator goggles and helmet," and a helmet
"teaming with Chamaco Valaguez Jr., and Sensei" comma not needed in that spot
"Due to CMLL's working relationship with International Wrestling Revolution Group (IWRG), including participating in IWRG's 2005 Guerra del Golfo event." Sentence fragment as written; reword or combine with the following sentence, since that's the reasoning for this sentence anyway.
"At Guerra del Golfo Stuka Jr., El Felino, Mephisto and Pierroth escaped the steel cage match, leaving Ultra Mega to lose his mask" i feel like we're missing information here. I know we don't want to get too bogged down with details, but we should at least know who faced who in this match.
"teaming up with Veteran Negro Casas." veteran should be lowercase
"and saw Stuka Jr. and Flash defeated Astro Boy and Molotov in the first round," defeat
"Throughout late 2009 Stuka Jr. and Flash worked a series" I believe you mean 2008?
"In June 2009 Stuka Jr." comma after 2009
"Stuka Jr. and partner" do you mean Metal Blanco, or one of the others he partnered with at that time? either way, should be claified?
"forcing their opponents to be shaved bald pr. lucha libre traditions." bald per lucha
It seems like post-2013 matches dried up a lot. Was he just not wrestling as frequently or was it a matter of being more selective with what was noted? That's fine if that's the case, just checking since it's a rare case of minimal recent content, usually active athletes are bogged down with it.
"worked undercard matches, alongside Rey Cometa." rm comma

I'll put this on hold and do another read though/possibly pass after the issues are fixed. This was a little tough to read in spots since it's a lot of matches without much else in between, though in fairness there's not much that can be done about that. Wizardman 02:04, 6 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, copy edit first, then I'll look into if there are significant info missing in latter years. MPJ-DK (talk) 02:21, 10 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Wizardman - I have done the grammatical updates, I will research his more recent years to make sure it includes significant matches and events etc. MPJ-DK (talk) 02:30, 10 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Everything looks good now. Fine tuning an extra match or two isn't a GA issue, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 13:51, 14 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]