Talk:Sustainable Healthcare

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Hello @Glasgow87: thanks for making an article on this important subject.

A suggestion: I would avoid making statements refering to any point in time as "now". For example: "Until relatively recently the way healthcare is delivered has been largely left out of the debate of how sustainable development is achieved. However this is changing, with a significant growth of published studies considering ‘sustainability’ and ‘healthcare’ over the last 20 years." I would rephrase this to "Until the beginning of the 21st century...", or some other appropriate version. Regards. Draken Bowser (talk) 11:21, 22 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you that is really helpful feedback. I have had another look at the 'background' section and tried to take the concept of 'now' out. Glasgow87 (talk) 21:46, 23 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]