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Promotional text[edit]

Does the section about the web agency and the affiliate marketing sound a bit "corporate". RoyalBlueStuey (talk) 10:50, 23 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

If you don't think it's appropriate for an encyclopaedia, then I'm happy for it to be changed or removed. What would you prefer it to say? A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 11:22, 23 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I have made a couple of tweaks to enhance the content and made a slight correction because founder is called Simon not Nick. I will try and formulate a potted history that isnt too pomotional but am happy to work collaboratively on it. RoyalBlueStuey (talk) 14:00, 23 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Huh... Dunno where I got "Nick" from... Thanks for the the correction. I like the changes – I've just gone through and made some copy-edits to conform to the manual of style. Nice work. A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 19:20, 23 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Can I flag up that this website reads like an advertisement for this company? I came across it be accident and this is not a neutral article.Blueflightmedic (talk) 07:20, 4 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

If you think that any part of this article is unencyclopaedic or overly promotional then go ahead and remove it (FWIW, I'd be inclined to agree with you). If anyone disagrees with a particular edit, it can always be undone and then discussed further right here on the talk page. Thanks, A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 08:31, 4 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]