Talk:Từ hôm nay (Feel Like Ooh)

A fact from Từ hôm nay (Feel Like Ooh) appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 9 March 2018 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Chi Pu's song "Từ hôm nay (Feel Like Ooh)" received an overwhelmingly negative reception, with some reviewers calling it "disastrous"?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2018/March. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Từ hôm nay (Feel Like Ooh).

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English language review Comment[edit]

First, I do not have the formal qualifications to be recognized as a "copy editor", but English is my native language, and I have done a good bit of proof reading/copy editing over 40 plus years. So, I hope you will not mind if I proceed to edit the rest of the article. You have an excellent grasp of the English language. Most of my changes have to do with readability for English speakers. I am having a bit of a laugh at myself, because I would never have read this article, had I not seen your request. I have viewed the You Tube video, and I agree with the critics. I liked the "jazz" version by one artist, and the "dance" version by(Slim V?) much better. IMO, your language skills would not prevent the article from being accepted by WP. Best wishes, Tribe of Tiger ^{Let's Purrfect!}

@Tribe of Tiger: Wow, thank you so much for your help and for your extremely kind words. You're more than welcome to do further edits on the article! I'm hoping that you can check my newly-added introduction. And thank you again! Beyoncetan (talk) 00:09, 7 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

P/S: @Tribe of Tiger: It's amazing that you watched the video and the other versions. I'm glad that you enjoyed them.

Beyoncetan (talk) 00:12, 7 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Beyoncetan: I have finished the edits to your article. The new intro section is great! You are a good writer in any language! My attention was engaged and I enjoyed reading what you wrote. At the end I saw the mention of the jazz version and Slim V! This was fun. I will check back in a few days to see how things are going, but let me know if I can help you again in the meantime. Best of luck with your endeavors, let us keep in touch. Sincerely, Tribe of Tiger ^{Let's Purrfect!} 04:58, 7 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Tribe of Tiger: Thank you so much for your help and for being so good-hearted and kind to me! It was such a pleasure talking to you! Beyoncetan (talk) 07:14, 7 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Per this, if you'd like I can move the article to mainspace; I agree with Jonesey95 that it looks ready. All the best, Miniapolis 15:06, 7 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Miniapolis: Oh it hasn't finished yet. I will tell you when I'm ready. Thank you for your help! Beyoncetan (talk) 02:23, 8 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Miniapolis: The article is ready, can please move it for me? Thank you! Beyoncetan (talk) 16:23, 9 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Done. All the best, Miniapolis 16:33, 9 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The fish tank...[edit]

You have added that she is in a 4000 meter fish tank. I think you meant 4000 Liter?? This article is really great! see ya! Tribe of Tiger ^{Let's Purrfect!} 06:10, 9 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Tribe of Tiger: I have no idea, hahaha. The interviewer said it in one of the videos that I used as sources. I think she mistook it. Maybe I'll remove the information entirely. Thank you for noticing! Beyoncetan (talk) 10:22, 9 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Tribe of Tiger: I've finished the article and re-wrote several parts. Would you mind giving it a check, please? Beyoncetan (talk) 17:14, 9 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]