Talk:The Bob Next Door/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 01:14, 29 February 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

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1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   • The sentence ""The Bob Next Door" is the twenty-second episode of The Simpsons' twenty-first season and the 463rd episode overall on Fox Broadcasting Company." needs to be reworded.
   • The sentence "However, Bart is convinced that Walt is his archenemy, Sideshow Bob in disguise, because, rather worryingly, they have the same voice." is very choppy and needs to be reworded.
   • There are several other long and choppy sentences throughout the article that should also be reworded.
     • Could you give me instances if there are still some? I hope I removed them all.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   • The episode makes no clear proof that Texas, Minnesota, California and New Jersey are the other four states.
     • Removed.
   • Citation needed for "Bob mentions a spoiler moment in the Harry Potter series, which annoys Bart, as he has not reached that book yet, even though, as Bob says, the book was four years old at the time of this episode's broadcast."
     • Removed.

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   • Can a little more detail be added to the lead, specifically about the plot? Also mention what date the episode aired in the lead.
     • More about the plot and the the air date added.
   • Is there a reason why the episode didn't air on January 14?
     • None of which I know.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

I will put the article on hold for fixes to be made. Dough4872 01:14, 29 February 2012 (UTC)

Anything else? ~~Ebe123~~ → report 01:50, 29 February 2012 (UTC)

After some more fixes I made myself, I am ready to pass the article. Dough4872 02:04, 29 February 2012 (UTC)

Thanks! ~~Ebe123~~ → report 11:26, 29 February 2012 (UTC)