Talk:The Greatest Romance Ever Sold/GA1
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Reviewer: CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs) 04:00, 30 September 2016 (UTC)
Hello, my name is CaliforniaDreamsFan, and I'll be reviewing your article! Full review coming soon, so stay tuned!
Infobox[edit]
- Remove the reference and just added it to the 'Composition and release' section.
Lead section[edit]
- "Several critics found the single reminiscent of his previous studio album, Diamonds and Pearls (1991)." — "Several music critics (link) found the single reminiscent to the work of his previous studio album, Diamonds and Pearls (1991)."
- Mention the genre of hip-hop and soul in the second paragraph, since its identified in the infobox.
- Add release year of Rave In2 the Joy Fantastic.
Composition and release[edit]
- As stated above, add the link of the soul genre here.
- Mention the songs release date.
- Well written, nevertheless
- I corrected the recording date if the live performance https://www.concertarchives.org/concerts/prince--5
Reception[edit]
- I would just merge the critical reception and commercial performance together, since they both feature very few sentences.
- Add a consensus of the critical analysis of the single; e.g., The track received positive reviews from music critics.
- Everything else is good!
Track listing and formats[edit]
- "United States" — "US"
- "Spain" — "Spanish"
Credits and personnel[edit]
- Any details of its recording/mixing/production whereabouts, other credits, etc.
Overall GA conclusion[edit]
A really good article! On hold for 7 days for additional editing. Please ping me for any inquires or when you have finished! Good luck CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 04:00, 30 September 2016 (UTC)
- @CaliforniaDreamsFan: All done! Thanks so much! Carbrera (talk) 22:21, 30 September 2016 (UTC)
- Passing! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 03:54, 1 October 2016 (UTC)