Talk:The Lakes (song)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:46, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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" a midtempo indie ballad, " sea of blue.
" in Windermere, the largest lake " natural lake.
"has ever penned" written.
"and UK Downloads" that's not it's formal name, it's "UK Singles Downloads Chart"
"Kitty Committee Studio (Los Angeles)" is mentioned (unref) in the infobox and nowhere else.
As is "Rough Customer Studio (New York City)".

Both of them are sourced in the album's liner notes, as stated in Personnel. BawinV (talk) 08:23, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Length of 3:47 is in infobox but nowhere else with no citation.
"would come out at midnight" that same day. And how did she announce it?
"Swift as imageries and visuals subconsciously" whaaaat? Let's try to keep it encyclopedic.
" songs on folklore, "The " overlinked, and you need to be consistent about formatting that album title.
"An aerial view..." that's a fragment, no full stop.
"ballad[12] driven" gah, move that ref.
" D3 to F♯4" links.
"moderate tempo of" link.
"located in the Lake District of the country." not "of the country".
"around to tweet it"," you link tweet here, but not before, do it first time.
"settings,[16][17][18][4] getting" ref order.
"like the Lake Poets did.[19][13]" ref order, and probably no need for "did".
Lots of "X of Y", you could mix it up a bit with "X writing in Y" or "Y's writer, X..." just to prevent the dozen or so "X of Y" you currently have.
"the UK Downloads charts" use the real name.
There's no ref here.
Refs 13, 29, 41: spaced hyphen should be spaced en-dash.

That's my lot for the moment. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 21:37, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Done all. BawinV (talk) 08:23, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]