Talk:The Original Dinerant/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 12:32, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be reviewing this article. Fast and quick. Gerald WL 12:32, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 17:26, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

"The Original Dinerant, or simply The Original..." This is not GA-needy, just suggesting. Since its nickname is "The Original," would you feel as helpful if this art. is included in The Original? Gerald WL 12:54, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 17:15, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"The Original [...] is most known for its glazed doughnut sliders and alcoholic milkshakes." I would link Glazed doughnuts, Slider (sandwich), and alcoholic drink. Gerald WL 12:54, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 17:19, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Link mezzanine level? Gerald WL 12:54, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 17:19, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Link bar? Gerald WL 12:54, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox[edit]

The History section suggested incumbent chefs "Ryan Bleibtrey" and "AJ Voytko." Should either or both be included in the infobox's "chef" parameter, if they are incumbent? Gerald WL 12:54, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I've updated the infobox to mention the current head chef + pastry chef, as far as I can tell. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 17:26, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Description[edit]

""retro mom-and-pop vibe"." Link retro style as well as mom-and-pop? Gerald WL 12:54, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 17:21, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
While the games are different than the original thing, I suggest linking Area 51 to "Area 51," House of the Dead to "House of the Dead," Jurassic Park to "Jurassic Park," and The Walking Dead to "The Walking Dead"? Many of these terms are unbeknownst to many; I literally just knew about The Walking Dead, like, 2 months ago. Gerald WL 12:54, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 17:24, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Oops, I forgot to say, I do not think we should link to Area 51. The topics are tangentially related and readers may click on the link expecting information about a video game or other franchise. Area 51 (series) may apply but since I'm not certain I think we should leave alone. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 23:03, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

One last thing[edit]

Another Believer, "Ryan Bleibtrey was serving as chef by June" was supported by two sources. I expect such short sentence to only have one. Gerald WL 03:24, 8 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Gerald Waldo Luis, Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 03:29, 8 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
And from there it has met the GA criteria. Sorry for the wait-- meatspace stuff going on. Gerald WL 03:35, 8 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

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