Talk:The Series Finale/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Remove the comma after "Wanda Maximoff's chaos magic".
Add a serial comma after "re-assembled" (American English).
Also remove the comma after "Maximoff's magic".
"survived development of the episode" – reword
Add hyphens between "fine tune" and "self acceptance".
"before beung changed" – typo
"labelling" → "labeling" (American English)
"eratic-looking" – typo
Add a comma after "In some instances".
"this episodes" – typo
"given freedom" → "given the freedom"
WP:RECEPTION: More reviews, less quotes.
"CHris Gridley" – typo
Be consistent with The Art of VFX and Art of VFX.
Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".
- ~~@Some Dude From North Carolina: Did you mean to pass this one yet? No one has addressed the issues you brought up. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 01:42, 15 September 2021 (UTC)~~[reply]
- Please ignore that last comment. I don't know where my brain is at. I thought these comments were new for the 14th, not from the 11th, and Adamstom.97 addressed your comments. Apologies and thanks for reviewing all the WandaVision nominations! - Favre1fan93 (talk) 02:49, 15 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

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