Talk:This Is Not Happening/GA1

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 16:12, 10 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

General

Be consistent with ref date formats; is it 2 March 2012 or March 2, 2002

Plot

Perhaps this could do with a bit of tweaking, the third and fourth paragraphs could be merged. Any synonyms for 'Later' as it leads the second and third paragraphs.
"and the agents realise that Smith is still in the compound." should that be 'realize' on a count of American spelling?

Production

"his che character..." should that be there?

Only concerns, otherwise I think this is fine for GA. No problems with sourcing and imaging, on hold. -- Lemonade51 (talk) 16:12, 10 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I believe I have addressed all of the issues. Thank you for the review!--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:08, 10 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]