Talk:Tjenare Mollberg, hur är det fatt?

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Tjenare Mollberg, hur är det fatt?/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:20, 6 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Another nice looking article, which I will review shortly! --K. Peake 07:20, 6 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead[edit]

Infobox looks good!
- Thanks.

"is no. 45 in" → "is No. 45 in"
- Fixed.

The best-known works part should be not be in the first para, as this info belongs around the area of the things mentioned as noted are
- Fixed.

Remove wikilink on Poland
- Done.

The subtitle sentence should be the second one of the first para instead
- Fixed.

Context[edit]

Good
- Noted.

Song[edit]

Music and verse form[edit]

Add text to the audio sample to establish relevance, plus the file is missing United States tag
- Done.

Pipe Songs to Fredmans sånger on the img text
- Already done.

Pipe ⁶
₈ time to Time signature
- Done. I'll note that this discards information; should Time signature ever become better structured, it might be that each time gets a subsection, at which point the new pipe will cause the link to fail to redirect properly. This is a general point, that redirects are often more specific than pipes even where they seem momentarily equivalent.

Pipe ariette to Aria
- Done.

"and its French performers brought it to Stockholm's" → "and was brought to Stockholm's" adding "by its French performers" after the theatre
- Not sure that passive for active is an improvement.

Remove "the" before musicologist
- No, this is a normal British usage.

"and the reality that the epistle was describing." → "and the reality described on the epistle."
- Done.

Lyrics[edit]

The writing years are not mentioned by the source
- Kommentar tab, fixed. Massengale confirms.

Pipe strings to String instrument
- Done.

Pipe notaries to Notary
- Done.

"The shoe-mender hits him," → "The shoe-mender hits Mollberg,"
- Done.

Reception and legacy[edit]

Pipe Joseph II of Austria to Joseph II, Holy Roman Emperor and polska to Polska (dance) on the img text
- Done.

"calls it a" → "calls the epstile a"
- Reworded.

"Britten Austin explains that this" → "Austin explains that this" unless that is not the real name, then keep as Britten Austin
- BA is the surname.

"Britten Austin notes that Mollberg is" → "Austin notes that Mollberg is" unless the above is true
- Ditto.

"how another member of the Order of Bacchus, Kilberg, meets" → "how fellow Order of Bacchus member Kilberg meets"
- Done.

If "a barrel is dripping"." is the end of a full sentence in the original source, then punctuation should be inside speech marks
- Done.

"inspired Bellman to song, but that this epistle" → "inspired Bellman's work, but this epistle"
- Reworded.

Pipe freedom of expression to Freedom of speech
- Done.

Wikilink flute
- Done.

Wikilink cello
- Done.

Pipe EMI to EMI Records if this is the label referenced
- Done.

"is corroborated by" → "is corroborated by the"
- Done.

"in Fredman's ep. 45"." → "in Fredman's ep. 45."" since this is a full sentence
- Done.

Pipe Lake Mälaren to Mälaren on the img text
- Done.

Remove wikilink on Sätra for the second img
- Done.

References[edit]

Copyvio score looks solid at 25.9%!!
- Noted.

Add the language parameters to refs 10 and 13
- Added.

WP:OVERLINK of Bellman Society on ref 11
- Done.

Sources[edit]

Good

External links[edit]

Good, especially with the YouTube publishers added!
- Thanks.

Final comments and verdict[edit]

On hold until everything is fixed; once again, you have submitted a mostly good article! --K. Peake 08:39, 6 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- All done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:39, 6 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

✓ Pass now, I added in a brief copy edit but this was totally fine elsewise before! --K. Peake 22:16, 6 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]