Talk:Togo at the 2016 Summer Paralympics

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:50, 15 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"Togo first competed at the 1972 Games in" Olympic should be specified here.
"They participated on nine occasions prior to the 2016 Summer Paralympics, where they made their Summer Paralympics debut in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil, with the exception of the 1976 Summer Olympics in Montreal and the 1980 Summer Games in the Soviet Union,[1] the former because of a boycott relating to the New Zealand national rugby union team touring South Africa earlier in 1976, and the latter because the country joined the United States-led boycott over the 1979 invasion of Afghanistan during the Soviet–Afghan War." Run-on sentence, consider a total re-write into two distinct sentences, one on their Olympic history, and one on their Paralympic.
Like I've said before, was there a flagbearer for the closing?

Otherwise, looks good. Courcelles (talk) 22:55, 15 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Courcelles: Once again I have taken action on your points raised above except for the flag bearer for the closing ceremony of which there is no reliable source that clearly states who performed that role. MWright96 (talk) 18:38, 16 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Nothing we can do about that, then. Passing. Courcelles (talk) 19:52, 16 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]