Talk:Tropical Storm Carrie (1972)/GA1
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Reviewer: ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 17:44, 19 July 2011 (UTC)
- It might be helpful to mention the peak in the lede. I also found it slightly awkward when you said "nearly weakened to tropical depression status". I would prefer reading "minimal tropical storm", or something.
- Link baroclinic.
- "Operationally, however, it was not recognized as such and assigned the name Carrie until 2200 UTC that day" - try rewording, it hurt my head a bit
- "A physically small storm" - physical isn't really needed
- Why did it slow and change its movement?
- "and hostile conditions surrounding the tropical cyclone inhibited immediate further maturation" - that could be simpler :P
- "The local resort industry suffered economical losses due to a portion of the Labor Day weekend seeing adverse weather from the storm, which impacted tourism" - that could also be simpler
All in all, it's a great read. With these few tweaks, I'll be happy to pass the GAN. I would even say that FAC could be in its future... ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 17:44, 19 July 2011 (UTC)