Talk:Tropical Storm Ewiniar (2018)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 23:13, 4 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will do the last one tonight. Noah^Talk 23:13, 4 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

then over northern Hainan replace the bolded with "and later"
and reach peak intensity. You should mention what the peak was.
ships were forced to take shelter Were they just docked? Something else?
Xuwen, Guangdong and Haikou, Hainan and Yangjiang, Guangdong Add commas after the second part of the location name.
30 cm (12 in) Change cm measurement to 305 mm.
- Following source here - it says about 30 cm deep. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 02:09, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
A total of 404 ships took shelter in the Port of Zhanjiang. Same thing here.. I assume they just docked.
- Source gives "anchored in safe areas" - that should be correct. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 02:09, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Ewiniar also spawned a tornado in Dali Is there an EF rating?
- The paper doesn't give one, unfortunately. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 02:09, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Longgang District, Shenzhen Comma after the second part of the location name.

That should be it. Noah^Talk 23:07, 5 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Hurricane Noah: done, thanks for the review. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 02:09, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]