Talk:Tropical Storm Koni

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December 27, 2013	Good article nominee	Listed
October 27, 2014	Good topic candidate	Promoted

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 22:59, 15 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Since the only damage total lists both currencies, you should adjust the note
"A subtropical ridge to the north steered Gilas westward for much of its initial stages" - disagree with using the PAGASA name here, since JMA is the official agency and they kept it as a TD
"persistent albeit moderate wind shear" - why the albeit?
You should use PAGASA's report, as far as damage and deaths
- Any reason you didn't use this for the deaths? --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 17:39, 23 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"heavy rainfall fell" - doesn't sound right
" Another person was killed in Tam Diep after they were hit by a prostrated tree" - was it male or female? If you don't know, find a way to avoid saying "they"
"with an additional 18 persons injured" - that math doesn't add up considering the preceding sentences

All in all pretty good! --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 22:59, 15 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]