Talk:Typhoon Elsie (1989)/Archive 1
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Confusing sentence
"In addition to the three previous typhoons that impacted the country, the Government of Japan provided $300,000 and the Government of the UniStates donated $25,000." I'm not sure what this means; some rewording seems necessary. –Juliancolton | Talk 16:24, 18 November 2009 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: –Juliancolton | Talk 02:27, 19 November 2009 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS): 
- Prose is generally good, except for this: "By October 15, Elise began to take a "stair-stepped" track to the west-northwest and intensified." What does "stair-stepped" mean...?
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
One minor issue before I can pass it. Good work! –Juliancolton | Talk 02:27, 19 November 2009 (UTC)
- Corrected the issue, thanks for the review JC. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 14:06, 19 November 2009 (UTC)
Tasing
Per: the UN: Elsies local name was Tasing. Ive added a few bits on deaths/damages (D&Ds) based on an NDCC sheet of D&Ds.Jason Rees (talk) 03:44, 20 December 2009 (UTC)